Hi Readers,
Claudia and Jamie have just arrived home from their run-away adventure. We didn't get to read the reactions of their family when they arrived back home. I want you to write a story ending that shows them coming home. Remember to include action, dialogue, setting, etc...this should be written like a story, not a summary.
Thanks,
Mrs. Springston
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Dear Mrs. Springston
ReplyDeleteHere is my story ending,
Claudia and Jamie ran inside to see there family, Jamie was happy to see hes family but Claudia wasn't. ”Thank goodness you guys are safe We where wherried sick ” their family said. After Claudia and Jamie got home and talked to their parents. Claudia was planing another time to go to Mrs. Frankweiler's, Claudia asked Jamie If he wanted to go and he said “ya but we can't stay the night”.
Sincerely,
Nathan
Dear Mrs. Springston,
ReplyDeleteAs Claudia and Jamie arived at their house Jamie said sounding a little scared “I wonder what they going to do?” When they went in their mother started asking questions.She asked “where were you?, what were you thinking?, are you crazy?”,Claudia thaught they should of stayed with Mrs. Frankweiler because are parents are going to be so sad and angry. After the questions they're father grounded them for two months. “Two months!?” they exclaimed. “Yes”. He said. But Claudia and Jamie were happy to be home.
From,Abdiel
Dear Mrs. Springston,
ReplyDeleteHer is how my story ending would sound like.
Claudia and Jamie walked in the house when their mom was in the kitchen bolling her eyes out. Claudia said “ Whats wrong mom?” “Oh nothing sweaty.” “Sniff,Sniff.” “Kid's!” Their mom said in excitement. “I was going to call the army the FBI and the president and your grandfather.” “Gees lu wees; you missed us that much!” Claudia said. “Of course kids. Now lets forget this all even happened before your dad comes back from his 24 hour job.”
So thats how I think the story might end.
Your student,
Angel
Dear Mrs Springston,
ReplyDeleteThis my ending,as Claudia and Jamie got of the fancy car and watched the car vanish.Claudia opened just so threre would be some space in the door.Claudia and Jaime peaked though the door.They saw a horable sight,there parents were sobbing.Tear by tear fell to the ground.Then Claudia and Jamie burst though the door.”Oh Claudia and Jaime where have you been?” asked there mom “Oh I was with my friends.” said Claudia.They were all were happy now, they promised to always to tell where they were.
from
Delan
Dear Mrs.S,
ReplyDeleteHere is my ending of the book.Claudia walked over to her home and ranged the door bell. But Jamie just flew in and opened the door and yelled “I'm home”! “Jamie is that you my little cutie” Claudia's Mom said. “Claudia young lady you march yourself right up stairs “. Claudia's mom said will nodding your finger. “Yes ma'am” Claudia protested. “ Why were they at your house and why did you bring them in a fancy car” Claudia mom said. ( and that is the end of Claudia and Jamie Saxnborg I had a lovely time telling you this story.
Your Student,
Kyle